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About to miss a train by =Jaydehawk:iconJaydehawk:

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©2005-2010 =Jaydehawk
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Deeply engrossed in her newspaper, she did end up missing her train. I ended up missing the same train as they had it leave from yet another platform... Eventually we both ended up in the same train, but I didn't show her the shot.

Schiphol Airport

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!eventsandbang Dec 8, 2005, 11:59:54 AM
I like the tidy'nes of the sharp "straight to the point" attitude the scene creates through its situation/surrounding.I especially like the way you have captured a very set and perfect setting through the objects set in place and how you have used these rather than the scene make you feel used ie setting in your own feel within the shots placing.While the person sat reading adds the perfect amount of depth and reality the work needed and idea.Overal a tidy,sharp and clever shot along with the meaning.Good work.4D.

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"Okay 3 2 1 lets jam".4D.
:iconriprescott:
~riprescott Dec 8, 2005, 12:42:09 PM
really well done capture, i mean the whole concept, lights, this white column and her sitting on the bench.
:clap:
:iconsputnikpixel:
=sputnikpixel Dec 8, 2005, 1:01:16 PM
Wow, great shot Jan. I like how reduced it is to simple elements, the column, floor and ceiling, the woman on the bench. The composition or balance is also very good - placement of the elements over the format and the mixture of dark and bright areas. The only thing I would criticize is the slight sepia-toning, bare b/w would be my choice. But that's nitpicking.

:+fav:

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All bound for Mu Mu Land!
:iconslowhand:
~slowhand Dec 8, 2005, 2:42:11 PM
oh yes !
I guess I know what devil did ride you here.
opportunities makes thieves ... :)

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I surprise the summer ...
:icontwodogs239:
~twodogs239 Dec 8, 2005, 4:25:47 PM
Loverly shot, so you do take your camera to work with you!

I like the structure and the light through the ceiling circles. I like how you did keep a hint of colour in it, it makes the girl look more "human" in such a beautifully stark surrounding.

Hope you was'nt late for work / dinner :D

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Go on shake my bottle if you dare , take care
:tux: :tux: :sheepish: :tux: :tux:
:iconpatrickbateman:
~patrickbateman Dec 9, 2005, 1:02:59 AM
i do like the composition and the way you framed the picture

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These woods are lovely dark and deep,
but I have promises to keep,
and miles to go before I sleep,
miles to go before I sleep

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:pride:

my :daprints: [link]
:iconpanopticum:
~panopticum Dec 9, 2005, 2:52:35 AM
i agree that this is very good.
appealing, straight and clean.

pure bw would have been my
prefered choice as well. but
thats a personal taste issue.
:iconjaydehawk:
=Jaydehawk Dec 11, 2005, 8:52:10 AM
Thanks :bow:

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Some people are so dense they create their own gravity well.
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